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alone in the dark
eyes closed...
listening and waiting
music plays softly
rain falls against the roof
the sound only feet above my head

soothing...
like a heartbeat
so predictable
my breathing falls into time
warmth envelops me
i doze off

i wake slowly
still warm
still waiting
still listening
the rain falls heavier now
the music has stopped
it is darker now
i doze off

now in complete darkness
no difference between closed and open eyes
i smile...
enjoy the peace
enjoy the rain
the more random pattern
it is still calm to me
again i sleep
this time, much longer
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:iconlemonstrawberryswirl:
I LOVE this poem. It flows so beautifully... and I'm so glad you're doing the challenge!!!

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Writing is easy: All you do is sit staring at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead. ~Gene Fowler
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thank you
i think cant work on it every day but on the days i do i will try to get five a day
it should work out well

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:iconlemonstrawberryswirl:
Yep, that definitely should work.

Keep it up! I love your work!

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Writing is easy: All you do is sit staring at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead. ~Gene Fowler

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